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my poem book *trig* maybe

Postby feelingBETTERkim » Sat Aug 30, 2008 9:31 pm

a few of the poems out of my poety book some of which have been posted on a poety website and have been published hope you like them!

Trains and Planes

the sound of a train,
the drone of a plane.
and like now,
was then so sunny.
but now i'm all alone,
in this place i call home.
and life is not like then,
so funny.

Broken Heart

The night you stole my heart,
was so long ago, our love now
is so weak and distant.
I was but a weak teenager
you a mature man.
But now the tables seam to have turned
who is the child now?
you spend you day laughing and joking
like an innocent child, I on the other hand
spend my day cleaning and scrubbing.
But as time goes on,
the argments seam so petty.
The nights are so long with out you.
I hate us being apart

Life Is Stange

life is strange
am i happy or sad
where i used to laugh
there is now only a week smile
my bright smiling eyes
are now dim and distant
the sands of time are runing out
quickly to quickly
life is strange

Sight And Sound

The sight,
The sound.
The silence and space,
Left my you in this worthless place.
The word,
The though the look and feel
Were they there?
were they real?
you left me in a void that night
was i wrong?
was i right?
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feelingBETTERkim

Re: my poem book

Postby feelingBETTERkim » Sat Aug 30, 2008 9:37 pm

this one was written about a friend of mine

Why?

why is it that we all just die,
we're born to die.
yet we fear it so.
this to my little Friend
of so many years ago
you did not fear
you did not cry
you laughted and played
you told me about the angels
you told me about the man in the sky
i did not realise you meet him so soon
old me live with out wanting
young children die with out knowing

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Re: my poem book

Postby craziememe » Sat Aug 30, 2008 9:38 pm

they're brilliant hunni xx
Craziememe

feelingBETTERkim

Re: my poem book

Postby feelingBETTERkim » Sat Aug 30, 2008 9:40 pm

thank you some of them i wrote before i even left school but its nice to read the old stuff. it took me ages to find them on the web its been that long since i last sent a poem off to be published. but ive now had 7 published so im quite happy with that

love kim
xoxo

ps i hope you feel better soon meme, you deserve so much more than the pain you feel at the moment

feelingBETTERkim

Re: my poem book

Postby feelingBETTERkim » Sat Aug 30, 2008 10:15 pm

i remember the first day i met you and i quoted my frave poem from r.l.stevenson do you remeber that poem i do off by heart just like i did that day lol
love kim
xoxo

feelingBETTERkim

Re: my poem book

Postby feelingBETTERkim » Sat Aug 30, 2008 10:44 pm

poetry is easy it doesnt have to ryme to me its just a very short story my frave poem is only 6 words long and its so powerfull it makes me cry every time i read it or recite it i do not know the authers name but this is the poem


" for sale,
babies shoes.
never used"

so powerful and sad

love kim

just sent another 2 poems off to be published i hope there accepted and published any of you poetry writers i would surgest do the same thing. its great seeing your work in a book and not just on paper and knowing that 100's of other ppl will read it

feelingBETTERkim

Re: my poem book

Postby feelingBETTERkim » Sat Aug 30, 2008 10:58 pm

Thinking I Hate You

thinking...
thinking...
thinking...
im always thinking of you

why?
why?
why?
im always asking why

HATE
HATE
HATE
i do know why without thinking


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